Notes from...

I'd say this is the one I'm least happy with, I was attempting to get the emptiness of the desert out New Mexico way but I ended up talking more about Madison's life at home. This seems to be an issue when a character is on their own the environment has to provide the story and the desert is really pretty but not much in the way of narrative happens there when you're on your own.

Internal monologues can be interesting but I'm afraid I don't think this one is. I include this here partially for completeness but mostly as I'm too lazy to change all the chapter numbers.